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When the Screen Went Dark

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When the Screen Went Dark

Build a storm narrative with purposeful details, dialogue, and pacing.

Read Like a Writer

Read the student narrative. Consider how the writer makes one storm memorable.

When the Screen Went Dark

1By seven, our outdoor movie screen stood above the community center lawn like an enormous white envelope. I had spent the afternoon helping my cousin Selin arrange chairs. Now I stood beside my careful rows, holding the seating chart against my chest. This was my first evening volunteering, and I wanted everything to stay exactly where I had put it.

2Before the movie began, a cold gust lifted the corner of my chart. The screen bulged. Beyond it, clouds erased the last strip of gold above the buildings. Mr. Vega, the event director, checked the weather alert on his phone and announced that everyone needed to move into the center. Around us, chairs scraped and families gathered their bags.

3I reached for a chair. “We should stack these first,” I told Selin. Another gust snapped the paper in my hand. She pointed toward the open doors. “Leave them. We’re supposed to go inside.” I followed her, but I kept looking back at the crooked rows.

4From behind the lobby windows, we watched the rain arrive. One drop struck the glass. Then three. Then the lawn vanished behind silver lines. I pressed my palm against the cool window. Outside, a loose program slid beneath a chair and disappeared. The screen shuddered, and the lights on the lawn blinked out.

5For several minutes, people stood with folded arms, watching the windows. Then Selin found a deck of cards in her bag. I pulled two lobby tables together. “Who wants to learn a game?” I asked. Soon, wet sleeves rested beside small piles of cards, and laughter rose over the drumming roof.

6The movie never started that night. When Dad arrived, I was explaining the rules to a younger player. My seating chart had dried into a wrinkled square in my pocket. I left it there and finished dealing.

1.
Which description correctly identifies the narrator and viewpoint?
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2.
What does the narrator initially want, beyond helping with the event?
Question 2 options
3.
In paragraph 1, underline the sentence that most directly establishes the narrator’s desire to keep control of the arrangements.

4.
Why is paragraph 2 an effective turning point in the narrative?
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5.
In paragraph 3, how does the exchange between the narrator and Selin develop the scene?
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6.
Which explanation best describes the pacing at the beginning of paragraph 4?
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Make Narrative Choices

Choose revisions that serve the story. Then plan and write your own storm scene.

7.
A writer wants to replace “The storm was loud” with a precise sound detail from inside the lobby. Which sentence best meets that goal?
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8.
Which added line would fit immediately after the narrator pulls the lobby tables together in paragraph 5? Keep the established first-person viewpoint.
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9.
A draft includes a full page about guests parking their cars before they arrange chairs. The parking causes no later problem. Which revision would best keep attention on the storm and the narrator’s response?
Question 9 options
10.
Which transition most clearly signals that the card game begins after a period of waiting?
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11.
The writer wants to strengthen paragraph 5 with dialogue that invites others into the new activity. Which line best serves that purpose?
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12.
Why does the final action—leaving the chart in a pocket and finishing the deal—create an ending that follows from the story?
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13.
Plan and write a short narrative about a memorable storm, real or imagined. Use a situation different from the model’s movie event.
Plan: Label four brief notes: (1) narrator and setting, (2) what the storm interrupts, (3) the key moment you will slow down, and (4) an ending caused by the character’s actions.
Draft: Write 100–140 words. Establish the situation, keep a consistent viewpoint, use at least two sensory details and one line of dialogue, slow down the key moment, and end with a result that follows from what happened.