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A Voice Across the Snow

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A Voice Across the Snow

Analyze how figurative language and word choices shape meaning and tone.

Read and Interpret

Read the story and the source note. Choose interpretations supported by the language and events.

A Voice Across the Snow

1The school closure alert arrived before Nesrin’s alarm. Outside, wind dragged snow across the courtyard, erasing the footprints below her apartment. Her younger sister, Maris, cheered into a pillow. Nesrin almost joined her. No vocabulary quiz, no crowded stairwell. Then she remembered lunch, and the unexpected holiday became a room with a locked door.

2After three weeks at her new school, Nesrin had finally been invited to sit with Tobin and his friends. She had spent the previous evening deciding which story about her old town might make them laugh. Her lunch container waited beside her backpack. Now she returned its untouched contents to the refrigerator, arranging everything more carefully than necessary.

3“Marooned,” she typed beneath the closure alert in the class chat. The word looked dramatic on the bright screen. She could hear her family making breakfast, yet she felt cut off from everyone she hoped would know her. Tobin’s name appeared in the member list, followed by a tiny gray circle.

4Maris leaned against the counter. “Maybe friendship is more like tuning a radio than flipping a light switch,” she said. “You have to try a few positions before the voice comes through.” Nesrin disliked getting advice from someone who still lost her mittens. Still, she opened the message recorder and listened to the nervous click of her own breathing.

5Her first recording sounded like a weather report. In the second, she explained the joke before telling it. She deleted both, then recorded a short account of Maris celebrating the closure with a pillow stuck over her head. “Your turn, if you feel like it,” she added, and sent the message before she could polish away the joke.

6While she waited, Nesrin remembered the traveler in “The House of Borrowed Doors,” demanding an entrance without allowing anyone to hear him. She had nearly done the same thing. A reply arrived from Tobin, who was laughing at his own failed attempt to make breakfast. Nesrin answered with a laugh that broke halfway through, and she left that imperfect sound in the recording.

7By afternoon, the storm had lowered its voice to a hush. Snow rested on the courtyard railings. From her warm kitchen, Nesrin listened to the soft brush of flakes against the window. Tobin sent another message. The distance between their buildings remained, but it no longer seemed to be the only thing between them.

Source note: “The House of Borrowed Doors” is an invented tale. A traveler expects a silent house to open for him. Its doors appear only after he calls out and lets its residents hear his voice. The reference in this worksheet is original, not a quotation from a published work.
1.
In paragraph 1, what does the metaphor “a room with a locked door” suggest about the school closure?
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2.
Underline the sentence from paragraph 2 that identifies the social opportunity Nesrin cannot attend because school is closed.

3.
Why does “marooned” carry more emotional weight than “home” in paragraph 3?
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4.
Which sentence from paragraph 3 most directly shows that Nesrin’s isolation is emotional, even though other people are nearby?
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5.
What does Maris’s radio-and-light-switch analogy in paragraph 4 suggest about making friends?
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6.
Which detail from paragraph 5 best shows Nesrin acting like someone adjusting a radio until a voice comes through?
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7.
Using the source note, what does the allusion to “The House of Borrowed Doors” add to Nesrin’s experience in paragraph 6?
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Trace Effects and Consider Revisions

Use the story’s details to analyze tone, evidence, and the effects of specific language choices.

8.
Underline the sentence from paragraph 6 that shows Nesrin allowing Tobin to hear something unpolished about her, rather than hiding it.

9.
How does describing the storm’s voice as a “hush” instead of a “threat” affect the tone in paragraph 7?
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10.
Which other sentence from paragraph 7 most directly reinforces the gentle sound suggested by “hush”?
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11.
In paragraph 5, Nesrin says, “Your turn, if you feel like it.” How would replacing this with “You owe me a recording now” change her tone?
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12.
Which feature of Nesrin’s original statement in question 11 most directly supports describing it as low-pressure?
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13.
The final sentence says the distance is no longer “the only thing between them.” Explain the two meanings of “between them” that the ending brings together. How does that wording create a cautiously hopeful tone? Use another detail from the story.
14.
Suppose paragraph 5 said Nesrin sent the message “before she could perfect it” instead of “before she could polish away the joke.” Explain what the original phrase suggests that the revision would lose. Connect your explanation to Nesrin’s behavior in paragraph 6.